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If we want to save the planet, we will have to drastically change our way of life. What is your opinion?

Shehan

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For the past few decades world is affected by many climate changes in bad way. Inhabitants need to alter their living habits, because it will help to ensure better earth for the next generation.

One of the most common problem is air pollution. This affect to humans as well as animals. Air is polluted due to the causes of humans like emission of poisonous gases from vehicles and large scale factories. The city of New Delhi covered with a harmful cloud due to these emissions. The air pollution can be decreased to a greater extent by replacing vehicles with electric vehicles and factory owners should focus about the carbon foot print.

Another major problem is deforestation, due to this global warming increases and natural habitats of animals also decline. This occurs due to the increase of world population and urbanization. For an instance, Forest area in Sri Lanka was more than doubled several years ago when comparing with today. People should focus more about growing trees and should think about alternatives like constructing large buildings where high number of families can live together.

Water pollution is also affect to greater extent for this matter. Natural water reservoirs filled with wastage of large scale factories. From this, amount of drinking water that people can use is decreasing. Nevertheless it affect to the water habitats also. To remove wastages, it is required to invent new methods using modern technology.

In summary, World is destroying mainly due to various types of pollution and deforestation. This can minimize by finding solutions with modern technology and altering the methods currently used by humans.
 

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There is some issue with sentence structures. For example
The city of New Delhi covered with a harmful cloud due to these emissions.
Forest area in Sri Lanka was more than doubled several years ago when comparing with today.
Also, it is lacking the task response. You have focused more on problem elaboration and just one sentence on how to overcome those problems. The essay requires your opinion on whether or not we should change our way of life. So, it must be more about solutions, like changes in daily style; maybe using more recycled products.
 

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What will be the band score. How to register for daily reviews?
There is some issue with sentence structures. For example


Also, it is lacking the task response. You have focused more on problem elaboration and just one sentence on how to overcome those problems. The essay requires your opinion on whether or not we should change our way of life. So, it must be more about solutions, like changes in daily style; maybe using more recycled products.
What will be the band score. How to register for daily reviews?
 

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