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Teenagers should have regular exams at secondary school as this will prepare them better for life after leaving school. To what extent do you agree/disagree?

Taking examination at secondary school level is one of the fundamental criteria for assessing student's knowledge and their promotion to higher classes and universities.While , methodical evaluation at the end of term is compulsory,there is still an iota of doubt that this will lead to better after school life .In my viewpoint,besides examination some other life skills and traits should be incultated in teenage students personalities so as to make them successful in future life.
I would like to stress on the fact that secondary school years are formative years and it is high time to give teenagers all the knowledge and skill so they go out in the world undaunted and examination is one of the basic assessment tool which is although necessary but not solely a criteria on which teenagers successful after school life is dependent.
On the one hand,examination on regular basis add discipline and resilience in teenagers personalities.On the other hand ,they instill confidence and courage to go out in the world as a knowledgeable individual.But this is not the end to it,being only good in studies will not help to fight this competitive world,a lot of skill including communication skills,team building skills and management skills are essential .For example,to work as a part of team,you need to have managerial skills to ace your work.So, better post school life is not only dependent on knowledge but also on skills.
In a nutshell,despite examination being called as a major passing tool, it cannot replace the expertise required to prepare teenagers for a highly paid , triumphant and contented life .Instead both should be equally adopted and paid attention to.
 

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I would like to stress on the fact that
Such phrases should be avoided.
Avoid such words.

Your ideas are good, but your grammar and punctuation need more focus. At the moment, it may score around 6 maximum. For any better band score, you should fix issues with spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
 

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