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Wars have always been a threat throughout history and in different regions of the world, there are continuing wars even today.

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What are the consequences of wars in general?

Human history have been replete with wars and conflicts. Some people argue that there was not a time in which wars took place and all living creatures were affected by these. Even today, people and animals suffer from particularly regional wars and conflicts. Two main consequences, which are suffering and financial costs, of war will be depicted in this essay.

One of the main consequences of war is the suffering of humans and animals. To begin with, not only soldiers and civilians are slaughtered or hurt during war, but also their loved ones may get killed or even may get captured as slaves. Therefore, people could get hurt both physically and psychologically. In addition, forests are burnt or seas are contaminated by chemical weapons and both forest and marine creatures die. As a result, war leads to great pain for all kind of living creatures on the world.

Another fundamental result of war is its huge economical costs. Countries have spent a great amount of money in their defense and military. Thus, they always declare that they are ready for any conflicts which may occur. This is the best way to convince society such expenses are justifiable. In addition, when a war comes out in a region, both essential facilities, such as schools, factories, bridges and hospitals, and houses are bombed. For these reasons war expenditures are a total waste of effort, time and money.

In conclusion, two obvious consequences of war have been discussed in this essay. People definitely need to consider these horrific circumstances which war causes and make sure their countries’ governments take necessary measures to prevent such conflicts.

P.S. : I am looking forward to read your evaluations on this essay.
 

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Now, this is a well-structured and on-track essay. Still, some improvement can be made in the introduction part. Make sure to not talk about things that are not written in the prompt, like animal point.
Still, you can score 6.5-7 with this level of writing.
 

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