Tips Here is my draft. I'd appreciate any improvements you can suggest.💐

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As we delve into the advantages and disadvantages of media for communicating information, books, radios, and television are mostly talked about. All of them have unique strengths but in my viewpoint, books are the most effective one. Here are three reasons as follows.
First and foremost, radio uses sound to convey information. When communicators are busy with using eyes, listening to radio becomes an effective way to gain communicating information. But it is inconvenient for deaf individuals and people who locate in a noisy place.
Secondly, watching television is a relaxing and joyful way to acquire information. But it has a distintively harmful shortness that is watching television for a long time or quite often will decrease eyesight to some extent. It has a bigger effect on eyesight than reading books.
Thirdly, reading books is agreed by many people as the most effective way to gain communicating information. There are two main factors behind it. On one hand, good-quality books have well-organized structures, furioushed vocabulary, ravishing collocations, and strict logics, which greatly help readers to gain communicating information more easily than other ways, even though it will slightly influence eyesight if readers read books for a long time.
Moreover, books code information as letters which are more easily to store in readers' brain. Instead television transforms information into images and audios, which are beneficial to understand and decode information but they are too big to store in brain. Radios are the same to them.
From the above all, books are definitely the most effective way to gain communicating information.
Here is my draft. I'd appreciate any improvements you can suggest.💐
 
Don't use AI terms like "delve".
Also, you ned to use real-life examples to validate your arguments.
The conclusion is not proper. It should not be just the final verdict, but also the key points discussed in the body paragraphs.
 

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